Reviews for My First Flash

[kingkillah]

Well it's alright

It's very good to tell you the truth, especially for a first. I've seen veterans on this portal who can't animate like this to save there souls. Almost everything is great in it nice music, wonderful animation, nice character design, but that's about it. The fact is the flash is incomplete so I can't really give a fair judgement on it. If you had submitted the whole thing I probably would've given you a high score, BUT you didn't. Thus I have to give you a 2/5 and 4/10, submit the whole thing next time and I'll give you a higher score.

[Da-Hui-58]

its ok but...

its far too short and nothing happens, make something actually happen as this was a waste of time tbh

[TheProduct]

good try

please finish it

[OfficerHairdo]

I could have given it a higher score.

Hey man, I know flash is tricky. I can't work with it worth shit. If this was a full movie I would have certainly voted to protect it, but I gotta admit I voted zero just because so many videos get posted on this site every day, and I don't think anybody would actually really want to watch this one because it's thirty seconds long and it doesn't go anywhere. With that said, I think you'll be able to accomplish something worth watching. it looked good- the art was pretty good, the sound fit, and the animation was okay. Keep it up.

[4oor]

ok start, but...

you really shoulda taken the time to finish it. I mean, It's not the worst thing on newgrounds, but its way too short, and frankly, it coulda had better animation. I know its your first one, but...well you know what, it was pretty good, but i stand at a 2/10, you shoulda finished it.