Averge
It´s pretty good for at first flash then I mean the animation was kind off good but If you practise I bet I will see awesome flashes from you.
Reviews for "My First Flash"
ahh
howcome noone ever finishes things anymore...just keep workin on it make a story line, try to be original, alot of stuff out their is the same.
Good
For a first flash it's pretty good. You've demonstrated a good understanding of tweening and you've produced something quite interesting. If it had been finished, I think it would have been good to watch. Keep it up. You're gonna get better and faster the more you work on Flash.
Humm..
There is talent in there specially for a first try, but never submit a partially finished peice to the portal, it's just gonna get blammed because it's too short, and too this and too that. You show promise but you need to learn to finish things. I know flash is a long process and you get excited and just want to show what you have been working on, but you gotta learn to hold off and wait before you post something on newgrounds. Because now the first thing you have submitted is going to be blammed off the portal, and it's going to be a blemish on your whole flash career, and will probally bring you down. Don't let it do this, but that all could have been prevented simply by only posting a finished product.
Well it's alright
It's very good to tell you the truth, especially for a first. I've seen veterans on this portal who can't animate like this to save there souls. Almost everything is great in it nice music, wonderful animation, nice character design, but that's about it. The fact is the flash is incomplete so I can't really give a fair judgement on it. If you had submitted the whole thing I probably would've given you a high score, BUT you didn't. Thus I have to give you a 2/5 and 4/10, submit the whole thing next time and I'll give you a higher score.