Good
For a first flash it's pretty good. You've demonstrated a good understanding of tweening and you've produced something quite interesting. If it had been finished, I think it would have been good to watch. Keep it up. You're gonna get better and faster the more you work on Flash.
I could have given it a higher score.
Hey man, I know flash is tricky. I can't work with it worth shit. If this was a full movie I would have certainly voted to protect it, but I gotta admit I voted zero just because so many videos get posted on this site every day, and I don't think anybody would actually really want to watch this one because it's thirty seconds long and it doesn't go anywhere. With that said, I think you'll be able to accomplish something worth watching. it looked good- the art was pretty good, the sound fit, and the animation was okay. Keep it up.
Averge
It´s pretty good for at first flash then I mean the animation was kind off good but If you practise I bet I will see awesome flashes from you.
Keep it up!
Despite being incomplete and your first flash...
its good animation!
finish it off and add more stuff and it will be ace.
its ok but...
its far too short and nothing happens, make something actually happen as this was a waste of time tbh