It says you were going to delete it 07
And its 3 months into 08 now. I thought it was pretty decent and you show promise as an animator. Good job.
Reviews for "My First Flash"
Joey-HeroBlade responds:
thanks. Oh and this flash stays as it is!^^
good try
please finish it
ok start, but...
you really shoulda taken the time to finish it. I mean, It's not the worst thing on newgrounds, but its way too short, and frankly, it coulda had better animation. I know its your first one, but...well you know what, it was pretty good, but i stand at a 2/10, you shoulda finished it.
looks interesting
For a first flash submission, it looks pretty good
Well it's alright
It's very good to tell you the truth, especially for a first. I've seen veterans on this portal who can't animate like this to save there souls. Almost everything is great in it nice music, wonderful animation, nice character design, but that's about it. The fact is the flash is incomplete so I can't really give a fair judgement on it. If you had submitted the whole thing I probably would've given you a high score, BUT you didn't. Thus I have to give you a 2/5 and 4/10, submit the whole thing next time and I'll give you a higher score.