Nice!
This was nicely done considering how long it was, I spent a good hour if not more on this. There's quite a bit of sloppiness, lots of spelling and grammar errors, as well as a few chases of dialogue which don't match the characters. But the positive out weighs the negative.
Sigh... Thank you for the nice review, I can't help but admit every mistake you noticed. Sorry for the grammar, I'm Italian and I'm trying to working harder on it.
But thanx!
Awesome...
That's an awesome sprite movie! I wish I could make something like this.
When I look at this, the first episode of my One Piece saga... I shiver in fear. You know, I'm getting better and better at this, and after two years I can say: "Yeah, I've really got better".
What I mean is: who cares if you can't do it now, try and do it anyway. Maybe your first attempts won't be that great, but I assure you that, after a bit of pratice, you'll already be able to see some progresses.
If you want to be good at something, do it and do it and do it and never give up, and in the end you'll be good at that something, that's for sure.
Hope I was of help, thank you for your review! ;)
friken awesome job
keep up the good work and don't let the low voters keep you from submitting anything else !
10/10
5/5
-Omega24000
Thank you, thank you so much!!
Anyway, I didn't give up. I submitted a lot of other movies and games after this one.
If you liked this, you'll probably want to see the rest... the second and third episode are online here on newgrounds!
Thank you, hope to see you around!
i like one piece mostly the abridged version
Everybody loves One Piece!! :)
Thanks for the review!
gotta love one piece and this brings nostalgia
It brings nostalgia, indeed. This was my FIRST attempt ever at making interactive fiction... I was so young and inexperienced then, and it certainly shows. But I'm glad there's still someone like you who's enjoying this old work of mine!