That was excellent work!
It is more interesting then the series they show on tv!
Reviews for "One Piece - SM 1"
Muja responds:
naaah! but thank you!
Good stuff
I really enjoyed the movie. Other than the obvious grammar/spelling mistakes mentioned, there was also some technical faults (for the intro, the text was too big, so it was hard to follow the narrator along with the text; some dialogue are too close to the edge of the screen; some dialogue isn't centered in the bubble). However, all of that can be overlooked (for now), because the dialogue was very "One Piece" natural and the story was engaging and interactive, which is a huge plus.
As a fanfiction writer, I'd like to do some collaboration work with you (we can both handle the story, while you handle all of the flash and spites and stuff), but I find it hard on finding my significance on my portion of the teamwork, because you have already set a damn well story (excluding those other errors, that is). All I can do is put you in my favorites and criticize you every step of the way!
Muja responds:
And I'll be glad to hear every advice you'll give me anyway, criticism or not. ;)
Thank you for the review, thank you for the ten, and thank you for remembering me of my usual mistakes (*sigh*).
I promise I'll pay more attention next time!
Extremly awsome
this was awsome great story line alright animation and its about one pice but there are a few things that are annoying me the swordsmen is zolo not zoro as you might know now well acctualy thats the only thing thats annoying me other than that it was super awsome gonna watch the others now
Muja responds:
look, pal, i'm really grateful to you for your nice review... but as i said a few reviews earlier... I don't care about the English dub spelling, as I don't care for the english themes of the english tv show... It's real name is ZoRo, with the "r". Zoro" was the creator's intended spelling, since it is almost always spelled that way in art and it is supposed to be based off the aforementioned character "Zorro".
So please... stop saying that.
Anyway, thank you and hope to see you again... the second and third episodes of this saga are online already!
See yah
holy shit!
how the fuck u didnt won 1st place?
this shit is so cool
love it congratz man u really do a good job on this :)
10/10
5/5
Muja responds:
Wow, thank you! But this actually was my first attempt at a flash movie, and it's quite... ridicolous, if compared to my later works.
Thank you anyway for your kind review!
gotta love one piece and this brings nostalgia
Muja responds:
It brings nostalgia, indeed. This was my FIRST attempt ever at making interactive fiction... I was so young and inexperienced then, and it certainly shows. But I'm glad there's still someone like you who's enjoying this old work of mine!