sweet
One piece rox woooooohooooo awsummmmmm!!!!!!!!!!!
sweet
One piece rox woooooohooooo awsummmmmm!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanx *_*
great
really good, there are room for improvement but its still great :D
Thank you! Yeah, I will try to improve! ^_^
Tsugoi!
This is the best One Piece fiction I've ever seen and you got everything to fit with the characters personality. But, Robin does not call Zoro "Mr.Bushido, Vivi does and the water fruit is a logia fruit because they let the user transform into the element at will. It's still full score though.
Really? I noticed, reading the manga, that Robin uses to refer to other crewmembers without using their names... Nami is Mss navigator, Chopper mr doctor ecc.
But maybe you're right! I should check on it.
Anyway, thank you for your nice review!
I LOVE ONE PIECE
Fantastic work.
5/5
10/10
What to say.... Thanks? *_*
!!!DUDE!!!
THATS SO FUCKIN AWSOME MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!I WOULD MAKE IT MORE HI DEF BUT IT DONT MATTER ITS AWSOME!!!
Asd! Thank you very much!