Not my style, well made thouogh
Sorry dude in my opinion this is your worst techno song, its just not my style, but considering it is your worst (in my opinion) and i still gave ut 7/10, that really reflects on your skill. No offense but slow techno just ain't my bag, great concept, not really too much you could improve on, very well made, overall nice job.
Listening.
Nicely arped. Kind of reminds me of the intro to orbital's "halcyon on+on". Strings are nice but might need a bit more reeverb. I would like to hear more atmosphere, perharps some wind or maybe some kind of background effects to add a touching emotion. Your piano is a bit too dry and loud and distorts way to much. I would compress the arp to seperate it from the piano and strings. That way they don't clash. It's not really trance, it's more of New Age. But it does sound like a breakdown in the middle of a trance song. I'd like to remix this some time. Focus on your mixdow, more atmosphere, and you'll have a nice chillout track.