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Good drawing
Bad animation
Bad Plot
Too Slow
A double homicide isn't much of a massacre.
Neck bones are not like those you see on a jolly roger.
It looked like he was giving his dad love taps with a baseball bat.
You have talent, but this is definately not showcasing it.
Keep making more, you'll get better.
Thanks, I sort of was going for a cartoon look rather than realistic tho.
Slow as the turtles it was based on.
I really enjoyed the voice acting, went a long way towards the quality. The animation looked nice and sharp, but it was just so slow in everthing that happened. I personally didn't feel the turtles personality as to why this went down was set up very well. We all know and love banana phone, but huh?
Apart from this though, couple of tips that might make it nicer detail wise. Fuel ignites from vapours, so boom should have happened within the air above the spilt fuel. When the bullet casings hit the puddle of water, a simple amount of steam would have been a nice touch.
I want to rate it higher, but the pace needs to be picked up. I hope this aids you in that quest.
Yeah, I get what you mean, the bannanaphone thing was to do with after you hear it alot it drives you crazy (therefore leading to Jimmy killing him).
I wasn't trying to make it 'realistic' tho, but your tips are good, I'll remember for the future.
Thanks for the review.
poor
really slow, awkward animation, terrible pacing, static camera angles, meaningless violence. a very poor flash. it's obvious you know how to draw but not how to animate or tell a story. i would focus less on the sound effects (in which there are almost too many) and more on giving the viewer something worthwhile to watch
I really don't know why this is on the front page.
There are plenty of things more violent and entertaining. You should work a bit more with animating some things and not relying on tweening things. It is the little things that make the difference; like animating the adjustment of the lighter flame when thrown, and why was the cigarette already burned? Taking the time to make the bouncing of the soccer ball look more fluid would be a plus, and if felt like there was no power behind the bat. It seems like it just needed more time.
Also, I agree with the last review, two people is not really a massacre. Keep working on stuff and put a little more time into the animation. The concept was good but it didn't really work.
meh.
animation was slow and stifflike....could use some work....but good gore... animation kinda ruined it though.