mmmm.....turtle. haha
I agree with some of the posts before me. It's a hell of an idea. Run with it and make a series!
Reviews for "Turtle Park Massacre"
metallica41 responds:
Well, it's my first real 'animation' so to speak, so I would like to improve.
I'm actually making a western action movie right now, but maybe after that, who knows..
Thanks for reviewing mate.
one mistake 9
i didnt like the whole godfather setting. not that new but it was funny the grand theft turtle idea was fresh you are an awsesome director.
WHY WHY!!!
He WAS A GOOD TURTLE!!!!!
I was expecting
way more death and chaos for a massacre. But meh, im not gonna bitch about how it wasn't so =p
Animation seems smooth, it is your first animation anyway. The story does move a bit slow, not unbareably slow, but it would be nice if it picked up a little faster. Most of us peope are use to instant gratification and get a little impatiant. Haha, well anyway, it was ammusing to watch. The voice acting was great and i like the mood you set with the music. Well drawn characters as well.
Some suggestions if you choose to work on it more. The only real thing that bothered me was that the turtles lacked facial expressions. The guy being beat down with the bat was stuck in a kind of lazy smile. The kid showed better expression. I dunno, but when someone is getting killed, i figure thier face would be twisting in pain. But im no animator, perhaps im asking to much from your first animation flash to have facial expressions. I know animating faces is very hard. But it would be a nice touch if you could.
For your fist flash, i think it came out well. Room for improvement but duh, your first time, your just gonna get better.
metallica41 responds:
I enjoyed reading your review, very informative and contstructive. Good advice.
Thanks alot mate.
lol
lol that shit was funny though it still is abit slow for my liking, violence was alright dunno what people are complaning about, graphics are cool. overall ill give you an 8 just cuz it made me chuckle.