Epic!
Good flow, good emotion. That's all i have to say :D
Reviews for "++_I Forgive You_++"
im not a big fan of rap...
but this,at least,follows the rythm.
it always follows the subject,emotive.
lots of rhymes.
great background beat.
this...is a rapart lol.(dunno what i just said)
10/10
5/5
MYDBoi responds:
lol thank you. This is just a Work In Progress. My vocals were horrible. I'm trying to get into a studio. Thank you for the review. I tried to put my all into this. At least i did on writing. Thank you =)
I like it.
"Painters put paint their are in canvas, but musicians paint their art of silence."
-Unknown (I forget who this quote is from)
I'm not a fan of rap/hip hop, but I like this. It makes me sad and reminds me of my earlier life (yr 5-10), my parents divorced and my dad wasn't the most respectable person. But after yr 10 he changed his ways and is back with my mother. Marriage is a holy bonding and should never be broken, but so many people today are corrupt with drugs, and alcohol to realize they are hurting the people close to them. Whenever I find a good piece such as this one I try to give a good explanation of my comment so here it is: This was a good piece with a deeper meaning than many people think, and when the people realize what that meaning is their eyes are opened to more culture, understanding, awareness, and overall self conciseness. You are one of the people who paint on silence.
MYDBoi responds:
Wow, that was a little tricky making out, the quote.. But I got it =). And SO true, very interesting quote.
Not many people are a big fan of rap nowadays. It's been tainted with. It's reputation is due to mainstream. Violence, drugs, sex, gangs.. That's not what it is though. Rap is art too.. its music. People just forgot thats all. One person can make a difference. Step up and make that difference.
I'm truly sorry to hear about that. I can't imagine the pain and sorrow you went through. You are the type of people that give me hope. The reason I do what I do. The reason I try to help, the reason I reach out. Be strong, let your past shape you into the hero of tomorrow. So when you see someone down, that is going through the similar thing you did, be the hero you were looking for when you were down. Help them. Shape the future.
I'm glad you liked it. I'm glad you saw my message, and understood the meaning. Not many people take the time to listen to it. Quick to judge.
Thank you so much. I really appreciate it.
-OxyJin
god....
i'm not a fan of rap
but this song is really.. wow..
it's just a little click-- and i never expected something as -- as great-- as explosive- as this would ever be on newgrounds.
but wow..
this blew my mind-- and it reached a part of me that i've shunned away.
it made me cry because -- here in this piece-- i never knew what it was like to have "my 2 older brothers had my back" -- when i got hit- dissed- and all that shit-- i took it all on my own.
my dad left my mom and my house was never a home
my brother hated me for part of his life- but it's not i like i didn't know
how he ever felt or how he feels towards us
my mom isn't exactly the best cos
she wasted a part of her life trying to be some one else
and now she's trying to catch up on the things she missed out on
and she acts like some kind of teen.
she tells me off and says i llook for some one else to blame- but she doesn't know how it goes in my mind.
and it's hard.. right?
trying to get them to see what they're doing, hoping they'd turn the other cheek
but instead they see it as an insult..
and the they take it against us.
i've always seen what i do-- but she never bothered to see what i'm going through...
this song--- your rap-- for me-- is really appreciated.
because this isn't something that's just for show-- like how most people write nowadays..
this is too good for that..
good stuff--- faved for sure-- downloaded.
keep it up <3
MYDBoi responds:
Wow, what a review. Thank you VERY much. I'm glad you liked it. I'm truly sorry to hear all of that. You seem to be going through so much. Kudos to you for being tough. I can't say I know the feeling 100%. But I have an idea of what it's like. My sister blames her kids for ruining her life and holding her back. It's wrong.
Sometimes people will never see something, until its gone. Actually, some people will NEVER see it. Some people can mess up over and over and lose things constantly and screw others over so much,
and will never see it or feel.
I'm glad you appreciate it. I make mewzik to relate to people, to tell people they aren't alone. Life is The Mewzik You Breathe. Music is art, its life. Art is filled with emotion and stories like music.
You've gone through a lot, let this shape you. Be different. Reach out to others who experience the same. You are not alone.
"Let the world inspire you. In return, inspire the world" -OxyJin The Mewzik You Breathe
......wow...
This song is amazing. I love music like this, thats about life and real shit that goes down. I love music, it keeps me going and having music like this that is real and legit just makes me love music more. I also thought it was funny how at the bottom of the authors comments u basically told your sister to stop being a whore. I dont know, it just made me laugh a little i guess. Idk how much you rap because ive only listened to maybe 5 tracks but I would love to hear more of your raps, you have a great voice and awesome delivery. Keep making music
MMFWCL from me, even though your not a juggalo (as far as i know)
MYDBoi responds:
Thanks dewd =)
I really appreciate your kind words man. This is the mewzik i grew up listening to. mewzik like this. And I've always loved it. but mainstream is killing it. People are losing sight of real mewzik. mewzik is all about emotion and life man. relation to us, not mainstream though.
Lol, yes.. I guess it is kind of funny now that i think about it lol. I haven't been rapping that long. 4-5 years. I didn't really step up til mid 2010. Thank you dewd =D I try my best. Though this is just a rough draft. The final will be so much better.
-OxyJin