wow
really nice art and fluid animation! the poem was good as well, and the animation captured the essence of that perfectly. very creepy, nice style to the whole thing.
great work!
Reviews for "An Unfortunate Corpse"
You truly are an artist..
I also watched and reviewed your submission with the fairies...
I like this one too.
It's just such a pitty that it's so hard to read. The font type and size made it difficult to read but you know that... Perhaps a different font size, and better contrast with the background would make it better.
Also, this is just a story scrolling along a looping background. Couldn't you just animate the story slightly more?
I loved it
and to cross666, A. if you found that hard to read, you must either be dislexsic or retarded,
B. I think the final fantasy song made it very interesting, i think it was the perfect song to use there.
C. I have to agree on the narrator part, since there is only a story to be read, a narrator would ake up for the lack of visual story.
Thats another thing you could improve actually, instead of him waling through the grave yard, you could have put a slide show of ictures realting to the part of the story, with the narrator reading, and then do the graveyard bit at the end, or even do it anyway, with the pictures popping up with the story.
Terrific!
That was a great poem and the whole piece worked well together! Really good job! I'd like to see more of your poetry on here.
My only complaint was that I found the text a little difficult to read, but thankfully it scrolled slowly so I didn't miss anything.
Again, great poetry! Very tragic and creepy, I loved it!
Awesome poem
Unfortunately though, it was going a bit slowly so I had to drop the quality.
Love the actual poem. The animation was a nice touch.