All sorts of spooky looking
It reminded me of the old PC game Nightmare Ned meets Lilium.
Although I found the poem to be wonderful, I feel that that sort of animation can be very distracting. If you try to focus on the visuals, you miss the story, and vice versa.
Other than that, it had a very very spooky edge to it and the animation itself was wonderful looking.
Oh.... And by the way... I commend you for using SH2 music. That series has such an amazing soundtrack, especially the second game.
very interesting
i myself do not particularly enjoy most things that seem gothic, but while being like that the way the poetry was nice urged me to finish it, even with the creepy, messed up, (cursed) zombie. i mean, sure just like what almost everyone says behind me, you could have animated it a little differently than a continuous loop, love the choice of music though, it really fits in with the whole story and the poem
p.s. i actually beat silent hill 2 in one sitting...creepy, i know.
p.p.s. more than one day if it sounds a little skeptical...yeah...skeptical, thats a nice word.
sry, i seem to have wandered off topic...so, uhhh...i suppose you could possibly make this into a series if possible, and it could get really deep. so keep up the good work and im sure more awards await you and your flash submissions!
I liked it
It was pretty cool, the poem and all just went together perfectly and made a great little flash. Really as a wr4iter myself I appreciate the work put into it. The music itself simply enticed you yo continue reading.
And to Haruglory12345..it wasn't supposed to make you laugh dip shit.
Pretty good but I have a suggestion
At first I was thinking this was going to be part of the Children are Scary series. It comes pretty close and has an interesting story however what makes some of the stories from Children are Scary interesting is the captivating monologue narrating the stories making it seem more dark and creepy. If you borrow that idea Im sure your work will be perfect.
Unfortunately, culture is not a place here...
I liked the poem, seemed rather dark and Halloweenish to my perspective. The concept in whole would have been better drawn out for those who... lack the patience to read. But anyway, all good on the whole, nice use of Final Fantasy 7's track there, worked beautifully.