hurt my eyes
Sorry man, put me to sleep and hurt my eyes trying to read the black writing on that background. Very beautiful drawings though, but presentation got to me. A voice reading it would have been cool, or more actions than just walking.
But still, very awesome drawings and love the dark theme and interesting poem.
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Animation was fine even though a loop but if u want people to be excited about this you should show how it happends through the poems story
maiinoki and darkness-darkness are retards
kind of creepy the way you compare the corpse and his body alive.
the music with the corpse walking scared the crap out of me and i hesitated to watch it, im sorry DarkGaruda, i checked your Deviant art, and it looks like you like emo, horror sort of that stuff, im sorry your getting a blam for that and the creepiness of the movie
ok hold up one sec. So becuase i like horror you immediately categorize it as emo? Your an idiot dude. My music taste is indie and punk and i don't want to kill myself, i love life. The 'emo' people you talk about are rarely in a constant miserable state. People really piss me off when they stereotype people when everyones unique.
I'm glad you got creeped out. Thats the whole point, its for that kind of audience who like that feeling.
Decent but
it seemed to be lacking to me. The poem was good, but the flash was merely a man walking down a road. if you had the flash match the poem that woulda been better. even if it were just well drawn still frames. I dunno. I was left with a feeling of incompleteness. very anticlimactic. when the poem ended I was like, "oh, here comes the fla-....no, I suppose that was the flash....hm."
ignore tosher
poetry is everywhere around and not just from one style or source. it can be metered or prose. what a douche trying to sound all "ed-oo-kate-ted". big whoop. different people have different styles.
Anyway, back to what I was originally saying, it was just ok. the poem was nice and the animation, though lacking, was there... in loop. i just felt that it lacked anything truly dynamic. others have mentioned and i would agree that maybe if the flash was showing what the story was that would be better than a loop of a man walking. Or naration might improve. anyway from the anim that i did see, it looks like you are a talented artist. now set to work on a masterpiece! ... or not.