Reviews for Awaken the Air

[drew6464]

Savage, if you don't appreciate rave...

Get your freaking butt out of this place, because you do not know what you're talking about. This is GREAT. Only a few things to say about this one. First of all, your main instrument isn't very strong or loud. Also, extremely repetitive. I have enough love for rave to keep listening, but some don't. Nevertheless, this is an awesome song, and I hope your song gets chosen!

P.S. If you're entering it in a game, you may want to make it a much shorter loop. If a lot of people post songs on there and one is 4 minutes long and as repetitive as yours, it may just get pushed aside.

OpenLight responds:

Thanks for the review!

I've seen longer songs be submitted for this kind of game before, so I'm hoping this one would work haha.

[Enteroar]

VERY good concept. love the bass

id tighten up the mix on the bass. just a BIT. cus its really good.
lower the volume on the cymbals a bit, mix them higher, they stand out more than the kick! D:
maybe add a snare and some drum variation?
love your synth melodies. love the little rift thingy@ 2:32
eq the synths to higher freqs, like 9k. assuming youre using fl, look up parameter 2 tutorials to mix a bit better. the song is a little rough mixing wise, but structure and all is good. sorry im kinda a rough critic.
5/5 8/10

OpenLight responds:

Thanks! I'll look into that stuff probably.

This was mainly just a test song. Hopefully I'll do better next time if I do this style again.

[savage677]

hmmm

ill give you a four though! this just hurts me ears. but it seems like an effort worty of a four for sure.