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pretty nice work there. the effects are all done very nicely.
a couple of things I would say though are.. it was all pretty much the same tone throughout - only raised slightly at the end. If you were to change the mood to more of a neutral feeling before 'scary' bits, it might provoked more reaction from the viewer.
The character animation wasn't the best either. Adding eases to the tweens (especially on head movements) might help with the realism. The guy in general is pretty plain and I don't really care for him much bcoz of that.
But still. I can't knock this submission. It's a pretty solid effort with some great effects, camera shots and sound. gj