Reviews for My Immortal I

[MC25]

really fucking kewl

very nice! this deserve's to go strait to the goth collection because it was really funny! at first i thought that it would be like a short music video because of the title, but then it turned out to be like a TV length episode of some sort of a series! now the animation was a little crappy, but good considering the fact that it was so long.

My only 2 suggestions are:

Don't rush the animation process since it is kind of important.

the dialogue was a little bit slow so try to speed it up or make it more entertaining

[wrathofpain]

haha poseur mall goth

hush raven! i your a vampire you gotta be more subtle
part of the beauty of goth is to be mysterious
hahha good fic though
but she wont beat my charatcers hahahaha

[Deathdream]

finally it ended

wtf, sounds like you were reading a poorly written fan text, and wtf was up with certain characters going goth and hogwarts being a teen drama. Though there was some actual music, but that didn't make up for the voice "acting"

ian-uri responds:

what was wrong with the voice acting? i loved it.

[draco5374]

My, I'm confused......

Whoever wrote that fan-fiction should be shot, first of all. Second, I'm not quite sure if the horrid animation, the incredibly juvenile lackluster artistry, and the monotone, bland voice acting is meant to compliment the sophmoric ideas of the orginal writer, or it's simply what your current flash talent is at right now. If it was all entirely intentional, bravo. You did a splendid job. If not, I hope your "talent" improves, because I just wasted several minutes of my life. Thank you.

ian-uri responds:

you're quite welcome. :D

[Renshu]

TWOOOOOOO

That's some Harry Potter shit right there.