Well done!
It was a well constructed flash, and it was pretty solid. But please reduce the filesize? Took me a while to load.
Reviews for "Haphazard Episode 1"
KEWL
this movie was cool, unklike some people who are dumb, what was that humoungous sausage loking think whith jeff in the boat part.
fair.
This was a fair anim. The frog's voice doesn't seem to match, seems like it would be deeper, more bass, less baritone perhaps. Kind of reminds of those old toons we used to watch in the 70's with the Beatles, the dancing cheese and conjunction junction.
Over-all very decent.
I liked it.
I really thought it was good.
you know what
i liked the corkiness of this cartoon. Some bits actually looked really professionally done, really well animated and the style is unique. however, I wish there was more explanation to the story instead of "he just got there, this is _____, etc" i think the humurous bits got really stale really quickly...and when the characters broke the 4th wall and started interacting with the offscreen voice, it just fell apart. The animation was amazing to look at, characters are interesting enough but you just need more development from them and better WRITING. The dialogue is pretty lame, no offense...ampy up the story, make things happen. I hope the next installment greatly improves upon this one!