Reviews for Haphazard Episode 1

[Grawr]

Not Bad, Could Use Some Tweaks.

I really enjoyed it. There only a few things I would suggest. Maybe alter the toads voice a bit? At times, it seemed a bit to low and out of place. I used to do some work as an anchor for my high schools news show, and the best advice i can give you is just relax your voice and stay in your vocal comfort zone (sounds weird i know). I'm not sure why, and this is just me, but i felt like the toad should have a german accent. Hmm. Well enough of me babbling, I really enjoyed it and will be looking forward to another. Peace.~*~ Grawr

P.S. I LOVED Gerald.

[DnaDraxxus]

Great job, but...

Great graphics and an amazingly smooth animation, in fact it is probably the best i have seen in the last few days. I thought the storyline however was a bit slow and un-entertaining. I am most entertained by humor, violence, or anticipation but it seemed that this movie lacked all three [until the end]. If i had to make a suggestion it would be to alter the beginning to captivate the audience and give them a greater desire to want to watch the rest of the entry. Good luck on future submissions.

~Dna

[Mad-Zoologist]

Great Work!

This was an amazing cartoon. It wasn't exactly that funny. The Graphics and Style were amazing. The sound was good to. Keep up the great work, and I hope you make more this good.

[SgtCowUtters]

Was good

That was pretty funny, my only problem is the voices. I mean the dialog was great but the pronunciation or something was throwing it off, like if a question was coming up it seemed like the person was making more of a statement than asking a question.
I'm not a teacher or anything it's just it really made it not as enjoyable for me. But besides that you did a good job, it reminds me of something the creator of Invader Zim would have made in the really early days.

[Nossers]

well what can i say

you would be a silly man not to make anymore. it was damn good, like the animation. keep the keyframe animation going, newgrounds needs it. well il keep an eye out for more if your gunna do any that is.