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This was pritty good, keep up the good work
Reviews for "Haphazard Episode 1"
ehh not bad
graphics were good but the voice of the frog wasnt good and it wasnt very funny
The Audio doesn't do this justice
your artwork is amazing, the characters are perfectly stylized and animated for a world called haphazard but the audio was just all wrong. First off, the voice acting was dismal, there's just no way around that. Not that there was much that could be done on that dialog, you should probably do a little research into what makes something funny/interesting because your lines failed to meet either of those standards. The music selection was hit and miss, sometimes you got it just right, like the intro with the pipe or the scene on the boat, but overall the music felt disjointed and out of place, remember, every scene doesn't need a soundtrack.
Remember that you're an amazing artist and have the ability to make something great. Don't settle for mediocre voice acting and script writing for an exceptional piece of animation. I'm looking forward to the next installment, let's see it break 4.00.
Not a bad animation, but number 1...?
Thought the graphics were brilliant, but wasn't really convinced by the voices, the pauses were in the wrong places and I found it a bit distracting at times...
Overall - not bad, but I don't understand how this submission came out at the top.
- Glynie
Good effort.
First off, I must tip my hat at the fact that you guys at least tried to veer away from the typical tweened look. Unfortunately, your fbf skills are seriously lacking, but I can at least can see your intentions in some of these movements and acting moments.
There's a lot of jitter and ackward staging. Your shot composition sometimes feels wonky. Story is also uninspired. Random characters meet in a random place inexplicably. There needs to be more substance.
For me, most of the humor fell flat, and the only thing I found myself laughing at was the voice of the frog. He sounds like he has a mental handicap, but I don't think that was on purpose. Maybe you should spin it that way though. :D
It's a cut above most of the stuff here, but it's still very very subpar. Keep on practicing, improve your fbf craft, and make something better.