Good stuff but....
the other episodes outshine this one. On its own this is a good work. If i have one complaint its that its kinda short. It seems like you rushed the story along in this one. The others were developed slowly, which was perfect for this kind of story, in my opinion anyway. Anyway it still gets a 4 in my book and keep up the good work.
YES, a better ending needed.
Look, ive been going through all this show to see what happened. To have it end with someone (but we dont know who) killed. Its just lame. not only that but i dont think either of them should die.... its just... blah. and random. Someone just comes up and shoots them for no reason? is it one of his friends or Daisys new boyfriend?
Also couldnt she of sent an email or letter saying it was over?
Alot of holes.
But never the less. Make it a non fatal bullet wound.
Wow...
This is the first time in a LONG while I've reviewed a submission...I was really choked by this, alot of it was a little close to home for me...I think the thing we have to recognise is how much one person can ruin a persons life...The bully through this series reminds me of someone I know, and they can single handedly destroy a person...I really liked this and hope u make another...Its the closest I come to crying in about 10 years lol...truely splendid, thankyou for this fantastic submission
Wow... what a terrible ending... ='(
And by terrible, I mean the saddest shit I've ever seen on Newgrounds. I watched the whole series before watching this episode, and I thought it was by far the most emotional and sad series I've ever seen and I'll probably ever see on Newgrounds. I mean, this guy's life is shitty even when he's WITH the girl of his dreams, then she moves to England and he's super emo, then he goes to England after like 5 years of not seeing her. And even when he gets there, the whore just shoots him down ='(. Then when he's sitting there in the park, wishing he was dead, that redhead comes out of nowhere and he realizes that she's the girl of his dreams. And after like 10 seconds of renewal, he gets shot in the midst of him kissing the girl he's never noticed in life. Kind of makes me mad in a way, since I just think of how I just want to kill every single person that's made his life wrong and allow him to live a happy life. But other than that, you did an excellent job with this movie. Hope you make a 6th episode to show what happens in the end, since you just make the screen go black, make a gunshot noise, then say "The End".
P.S.
Is that guy in the camo the kid that beat him up?
Is the guy with the gun the fat kid that beat him up?
Yes.
Yes.
........ :(
wow thats some deep stuff man... Damn you dont realise how true that is in life. I know many people who never find there true mate there are looking for and they have been best friends forever. Its sad to see how life is so cruel but its the world and life isnt fair... Which is i guess why you ended it that way.. Truly nothing last forever....