Reviews for Gun Devil

[Senevri]

keep it up.

I hope you can take some C&C. If not, please ignore:

Good:
Blur effects on fast characters
Scene layout and pacing
The black-and-white flashes of stuff getting blown apart
Sky int the beginning
Panning, quick cuts from shot to shot
Awesome dust clouds on impact

Bad:
Odd edges between graphics
Weird run cycle
Very minimalistic movement
Too much movement in straight lines
Kinda bland story-wise.

All in all, you made good use of what you had. I suggest you study a bit more and do more animations. You could punch up and exaggerate more.

[gangstera]

not that bad

it was ok. unlike like Dvid (the reviewer before me), I can really tell that this is made in flash. The colouring was very flash, with only the basic flash colours.The story didn't make any sense, and what was with the can at the start.
other than them pointers it was pretty good. the animation was above average and I don't remember that many motion tweens.
keep up the good work, your in my favourites

[MightyManlyPants]

pretty good

I like the more realistic style of anime better, but it looked like you put a lot of effort into this submission. Good Work.

[Gotzen-Dammerung]

great animation

But goddamn! Get better music! it seriously brought down the enjoyment level I might have experienced.

[TrashTalks]

nah.

newgrounds administrators should put a score for story too.
meh, i didn't get anything of this.

well you see- this is the story,

a man walks on the street
a man gets into panic!
the man starts to run,
the man is getting into a warehouse where someone weird, without any motives holding his "so-understood" friend.
this man helping him- because that bad guy wanna kill his friend and probably him too.

so what's my point?

there are random movies, and they are made in a very cool way- let's take for an example "lazy boy".
his animations are random and funny.

what you tried to do here- is to show something serious-
but the man SUDDENLY! FOR NO REASON! run to a warehouse and find his friend!

and that bad guy? why would he like to hurt them?

is this a series on the T.V that i'm not watching to know what you're talking about? or is it random and that's it?

there is famous man called- stanislavseky- he is like "THE GOD FATHER OF THE THEATER!"
so he invented the most important questions for a good actor- or a storyboard.

who am i?
what am i doing?
why am i doing this action?
where am i?
from where did i came from?
where am i going right now?

always remember these and i'm sure they will help you.

oh- and i didn't try to kill you with this review-
the graphics are great,
your style.. i can't call it your style :\
the sound... i don't like that language but.. i can't argue with people who do.
violence.. there is blood and... stuff? :D
humor...? not so very funny..
overall- 3.

man, it's not me being bad- i tried to help you- but hey- i'm sure you're gonna do better next time :)