Well animated
Animation looked very sharp and nice. Though I haven't seen episodes I or II, the story was interesting.
I marked only a 7 in the sound category because I could tell you only had a couple voice actors (the guy and the girl) for multiple characters. Perhaps you could look into some audio editing program such as Sound Forge so you can change the sound of your voice for multiple characters.
Aside from that, it was great. 9/10
Actually I do use audacity for Kayle and Jazz's little brother to change my voice. Thankyou though, glad you liked it. ^_^
Good work.
Ive seen 1&2 and i can see you're skill is getting better i really enjoyed this keep up the good word. ^_^
Thanks, glad you liked it ^_^
preloader
whats up with the preloader text? It seems to get smaller every episode.
OMG SO MUCH BETTER!
Yep. Now if it was only longer and had more story line instead of just a cliff hanger at the end (for this episode) I'd give you a higher score. But since I've seen the improvement in your work you get a higher score.
4/5
nice
love the anime feel the plotline is a little jumpy maybe a scene transition? and cain looks alot like midboss/the dark adoness