hmmm
Hmm...u have a lot of talent for this. The characters were well design, and had a lot about them to make different even though a lot of em looked alike. lol The story line aint that bad, but it could use a little work, a few time i was asking myself "what the hell just happened" but i got the overall plot. Just work on the story line a little bit and he'll be good. I read the charater bio, i laughed my ass off. One of the things that kinda bugged me was how sometimes the animation was a little choppy. I really enjoy this flah over all and i hope to see more of ur work in the future.
and anyone reading this review watch this flash, plz watch it, if not ur missing out on some good anime.