mmmmehhhh............
well many things stunk about this flash..........
1. music not in sync with fighting this can destroy you flash before it even starts
2. motions were so stiff it hurt my eyes
3. just in general the animation was choppy
on the up side
1. i like the DBZ references
2. good flash FOR A 13 YEAR OLD ONLY
keep it up and i know you will improve with time
Another dbz rip-off
Graphics-
very poor
but compared to msot of your movie it was probally the best part
Style-
your style was very plain
overal it lacked fbf and it was more tweens
Sound-
the music was poor
newgrounds does not take kindly to emo music so pick a diffrent band next time
Violence-
there was voilence
not great voilence but there was
Interactivity-
a play button
Humor-
it wasent a comedy
Overall-
try again next time
JackBlackkat you're a loser
Dude the kid is like 13, pretty good if you ask me. And that band isn't emo and I dont think people here care about what kind of music you listen to.
dont be a douche bag.
Needs work... but nice
It's kind of strange that you made a DBZ reference with a ninja. I think you should get rid of the ninja personally. When I think of a ninja I think of something that's going to slice up someone with a sword, vanish quickly, and move like the wind (along the lines of Naruto).
I'm agreeing with the previous comments as far as the music and animation goes too.
I gave you a 4 for humor
No offense intended, but when the ninja jumped I couldnt help but laugh.
Im glad you dropped the stick figures on this one, your FxF on this animation was so much better, and therefor will have credit.
To be honest, im quite suprised that the score isnt over 2.5, but anyway, keep at the good work.