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Reviews for "The Ninja part 1"

Not bad! Very original and wierd (in a good way)

Okay lets see here:
You are definitely a Dragon Ball Z fan and its a very good flash since its drawn. A lot of room for improvemnt and I loved the music. Why is Cell red by the way?? or is that what you wanted him to look like ( I'm 13 years old too but I'd rather make a sprite movie)

I like it.

I bet if you put a little more time into it, and really honed your skills, you'd be an awesome animator!

I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work.

Nice work

You really put effot into this. Reminds me of my old animations (Which never got finnished) If you were to improve this Add some more shading and include some really cool blur effects in the power ball thingys and do remember to inclide more layers cuz when you did the eyes I noticed their all done on one layer.
You my firend have got potenial to become a famouse flash artist. Just keep working on your animations. (Sorry I had to vote so low on the Overal. I'm just trying to be honist)

Good

It's a nice flash, few things though.

1 - If the flash doesn't match the length of the song, edit the song down for it to fit better (in this case the first verse and then the ending chorus would have fitted better) or try to use a none lyrical song.
2 - For fight scenes, try timing certain parts of the action to time with the music (Like when the bad guy goes through the mountain would have gone better with the exact beginning of the chorus).

But it's a good flash, keep it up.

It Was OK

It could of used some more work, but it was good in some ways.