Not bad..
Well it's at least better than most crap in the portal plus it being your first flash it was pretty good. So you get a 4
Reviews for "Madness Unbreakable 1"
hollowbullet responds:
:)
Good Shot!
Okay, its a little choppy but beyond that it is pretty decent. Better than anything i could do. My advice would be to fix the begining with the cars, because at one scene hes diving, then he teleports half way across the screen into a window. Other than that, i think this was a really good attempt on a madness remake. Keep trying!
hollowbullet responds:
Yes, I made that scene in photoshope, when I just started, not knowing it would come out distorted. :)
nice
for a first flash thats was nice.
id suggest make you chars move bobbing up and down kinda to make it look a more real or be more fluid. and i would make the head and body move away from eachother evry now and then. i can fix it up/ help you with it. AIM me at ArrogantWorm2004 and send me the fla and i can help you.
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That was going wayyyyyy to slow