Reviews for Madness Unbreakable 1

[Splurgle]

Look, I know you're still practicing....

But I seriously didn't think it was good. The graphics were bland, and messy. The animation was choppy and slow. The music was fine, I guess, the sounds were good. The violence was very obvious and repetitive, barely any sort of physics or realistic movements involved...

But I'm just saying. You need to improve your flash skills a lot more in order to make a decent movie. And I do admit, I was sort of impressed that this passed judgement.

Keep trying, I'm just criticizing, it's meant to help you. I want to see you improve! :)

1/5
~Splurgle

hollowbullet responds:

Ya, Part of the bad graphics is involved with me having to resize every frame. I know know my frame sizes better and am starting to inprove in my animation. Thanks again all these reviews help me a lot with my ideas and such. ;)

[Crisafeic]

Awesome

Try to get the framerate a little higher though, kinda hurt my head

Don't know why this has such a low score. But Keep up the fantastic work.

hollowbullet responds:

Gonna try to increase the frame rate in numba 3 still working at 12 though. Thanks for the review.

[VDavion]

OK

Pretty good for a first but, the screen was all glitchy. Voted 2

hollowbullet responds:

Cause of the frame resizes.

[hollohill]

An insult to the Madness series.

First of all, just to get this out of the way, don't tell your potential viewers to cut you some slack for this being your first project. People don't care! They'll speak thier mind, no matter what.
Ok, so since this is your first flash, I'll tell you how mutch this sucks, then tell you were you need improvement. This movie doesn't capture the spirit of Madness well or represent the characters well. The animation is terrible, as if it was made with powerpoint!
Ok, were you need improvement. First of all, replace that hip-hop with some unique music; we're all tired of overused music styles. Second, work on the animation. Don't release a movie until its up to par compared to the big boys. Study other great movies; check for smooth animation and clean/unique artwork. Then make you're movie and check constantly for quality.
Finally, don't try to make a movie that is supposed to be like one of the great series(es) for your first flashes.

hollowbullet responds:

Thank you, you can exspect MU2 to be much better. Going to realese a trailer soon.

[highcrusader]

Keep 'em coming.

I have to admit it, man. This is one of a VERY small group of first submissions that I enjoyed. Usually my reccomendation is put more effort into the next one, flesh it out, if you follow me. But you already did that..... your animation could be better (but not for a first try, this was awesome), and you need some original material, but nevertheless, good job, mate. I'm proud to have rated this a 5/5 for an awesome first try.

hollowbullet responds:

Happy to please. [+ +]
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