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i give u a 9/10 because the intro made the song look kinda cr@py and then i sed this song sux but when i listen to the rest its kinda awsome
Reviews for "Artifice and Inquisition"
InvisibleObserver responds:
I gave you 9 / 10 because you looked kind of crappy at first. I was all like, Wilsonkiler sucks. Then I slept with him, and now I realize he's kind of awesome.
Babe. ;)
10 out of 10, 5 out of 5
So unique song, really earcatching intro with crisp effects. It somehow represents the outstrecthed reflections of ourselfs in an distorted and dark everyday, because of the cool intro, where it first of all sounds distorted, but then the chilly pluck enters and changes the mood like wow. The song tells a story: The intro is how the world looks dark and lost sometimes. The smooth pluck sound is aggravating to the distorted and translucent reality in our dark everyday and it brightens everything up. Cool mixing job, nice and original song. Keep it up mate!
-Etalo
InvisibleObserver responds:
Colorful a description Mr.Etalo.
Intro got my attention.
I started listening, and didn't even know what to think of the intro. So... Strange. I don't quite have the right adjective to describe it. It's just a great intro. There is some scratching with some vocals around the 1:30ish mark, that needs to be just scratching. It's a great scratch solo, and it needs to be given it's chance for glory. The only other thing I didn't like was how rare a complete word is heard, but that's a matter of my personal preference, not your composing ability, so I'm not taking points away for that.
Great job mate, keep it up!
InvisibleObserver responds:
Fair review, thanks for the comments. I considered having a scratch solo of sorts, but when there's nothing else playing, since its not actual scratching but a large series of tape stop effects... without other sounds playing the seams start to show in a sense which can detract a lot from the overall song.
Great!
Sounds like one of my favourite works of yours so far))
The tune is absolutely brilliant and diverse enough to keep me coming back to hear more and more of this song))
Sharp to the ear? Well, arguable to say the least)) To my ear, it would lose so much in power if it were any softer. Everything in the song is just right.
Great work =)
InvisibleObserver responds:
Lot of time spent on the mix, I've improved dramatically in that field given what I'm usually dealing with being rather convoluted (this piece not so much). No peaks or distorts, nothing too silent, freq range is very nicely spread. I'm quite proud of this from a technical mixing stand point.
Thanks!
Ur improving dude
It is more pleasent, but I'm not a big fan of these hits you use, it destroys the good feeling, keep it at the more pleasent piece and maybe add a softer instrument too, because the ones you use are pretty sharp to the ear.
As I said, you are improving, keep at it.
5'd
InvisibleObserver responds:
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