Not to bad.
Its not that bad to listen to i'm hearing alot generic dance techniques used in this at the beginning then it kinda evolves into something else. I will agree with below that the vocals are a slight bit to loud for the music. All in all however its still a good listen and a wonderful project. Keep on it!
Wyldfyre1
Thanks for the honest review...like I said, the vocals were probably kicked up a notch too many because we (Xayro and I) usually get told my vocals are a bit soft. When the song is getting ready to be officially released, I will turn down the volume. But, for right now, it's a small error and not worth removing the song to re-upload.
xxAisarene
Could use a little work, but not bad
I really liked the bit that starts around 1:01, and from there, it was pretty good. Something seemed off about the first minute, and I can't really figure out what.
Hm, maybe it's a bit repetitive for the first minute. Nonetheless, I'm glad you liked the rest of the song. Thanks for the review!
xxAisarene
I agree with FoundUnderNewGround
I too didn't like it because of it's squished together beats. He kind of summed it all up. I would slow it down a bit to make it better.
It's a dance/rave track, so it's going to be fast. It's meant to dance to! But, like I said to the previous comment, let me know where and I'll give it a listen to better understand what you're talking about.
xxAisarene
It's not bad....
But it's nothing special either. The lyrics were forgettable, I feel like the focus was on them too much, and it didn't work out well since the vocalist wasn't capable of carrying the song. Besides the vocals, the song is well done, but unique by no means.
I would hope that I was capable of carrying the song, as it was my concept/lyrics/vocal melody and vocals. I don't honestly feel anyone could carry a song better than the person that wrote it unless said person was a horrible singer, which, I don't believe I am. Thanks for the critique, but I'm going to keep singing my songs. =)
I'll tell Xayro his production was good though.
xxAisarene
Decent
Vocals are out of sync (mainly at start), as well as quite poorly mixed and overly autotuned. Overall, mastering is not exceptional. Sorry for being so harsh, but it can be improved A LOT.
I'm sorry, but I have to disagree with your review. Raver Girl is not 100% complete, nor do I claim to be professional or have access to a professional recording studio. I'm sorry, but if you think Newgrounds is a place to find perfection, perhaps you're on the wrong site. =/
Also, on a lighter note, yes...there is a non-Radio Edit. =)