Great melody and instrumental work
Balancing the vocals with the rest of the tune is a different issue... and also, I don't really like how the vocals sound with autotune or whatever you used, because sometimes it sounds off, or robotic to say the least.
The vocals aren't exactly consistent either, and when certain words are said, it sounds awkward to me.
Very catchy though, thumbs up!
Robotic...that was the point of using AutoTune. Dance music is futuristic...and we (Xayro and I) thought it added more to the song. According to our ears and programs, the vocals are on-key with the melody. I'll double check though.
Music is about doing what you love, and Raver Girl was honestly probably my favorite project. I appreciate the honest review, and as stated, I will double check, but I think everything is on-key. And, the autotune is just something I liked with the song.
wow 2 years? o:
I found the vocals better than the instrumental. The claps sound to loud to me, and the song changes rhythm to often. The bass is abit strange in some places and doesnt fit with the melo.
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I'll have to do that. And, hm...it does change consistently, but, I've never been a fan of overly-repetitive songs.
xxAisarene
Could use a little work, but not bad
I really liked the bit that starts around 1:01, and from there, it was pretty good. Something seemed off about the first minute, and I can't really figure out what.
Hm, maybe it's a bit repetitive for the first minute. Nonetheless, I'm glad you liked the rest of the song. Thanks for the review!
xxAisarene
I agree with FoundUnderNewGround
I too didn't like it because of it's squished together beats. He kind of summed it all up. I would slow it down a bit to make it better.
It's a dance/rave track, so it's going to be fast. It's meant to dance to! But, like I said to the previous comment, let me know where and I'll give it a listen to better understand what you're talking about.
xxAisarene
Decent
Vocals are out of sync (mainly at start), as well as quite poorly mixed and overly autotuned. Overall, mastering is not exceptional. Sorry for being so harsh, but it can be improved A LOT.
I'm sorry, but I have to disagree with your review. Raver Girl is not 100% complete, nor do I claim to be professional or have access to a professional recording studio. I'm sorry, but if you think Newgrounds is a place to find perfection, perhaps you're on the wrong site. =/
Also, on a lighter note, yes...there is a non-Radio Edit. =)