nice!
Pros-
the melody is awesome
it is a novelty for an electronic song here to have lyrics at all.
the song transitions very well
Cons-
the words can be hard to understand sometimes.
the singing is a bit loud next to everything else.
Other stuff-
Don't worry about the cons, the fact that you have words at all make your song stand out amongst the crowd.
~DJ Majaro
Hm, that's a first...usually people say vocals are too soft so I must've kicked them up a notch too many and not noticed. I also might post the lyrics up sometime, since they're hard to understand. Thank you for a good and honest review. And yes, I agree, not many songs have vocals on here! It makes me sad because sometimes (not always) vocals are what a song needs. There are a few talented vocalists on here, and some musicians that would be a lot more recognized with a vocalist.
xxAisarene
nice
this sounds almost like melody&mezo just as great
maybe even beter since its not only techno
I had never heard of them before this comment. I actually just went and looked. And WOW thank you for the compliment, they have beautiful music.
Great melody and instrumental work
Balancing the vocals with the rest of the tune is a different issue... and also, I don't really like how the vocals sound with autotune or whatever you used, because sometimes it sounds off, or robotic to say the least.
The vocals aren't exactly consistent either, and when certain words are said, it sounds awkward to me.
Very catchy though, thumbs up!
Robotic...that was the point of using AutoTune. Dance music is futuristic...and we (Xayro and I) thought it added more to the song. According to our ears and programs, the vocals are on-key with the melody. I'll double check though.
Music is about doing what you love, and Raver Girl was honestly probably my favorite project. I appreciate the honest review, and as stated, I will double check, but I think everything is on-key. And, the autotune is just something I liked with the song.
wow 2 years? o:
I found the vocals better than the instrumental. The claps sound to loud to me, and the song changes rhythm to often. The bass is abit strange in some places and doesnt fit with the melo.
Please check out my music if you get a chance,
Thanks
~Enteroar
I'll have to do that. And, hm...it does change consistently, but, I've never been a fan of overly-repetitive songs.
xxAisarene
My thoughts...
This is very original its not my type of techno but its good i like the beat but in my eyes this is very weird. dont let me get you down thou... :) its good. i just dont like it personally
Thank you for being honest, and actually rating the song based what it is. Most of the 0's people get are just because it's not the 0'ing person's style. Usually, I will vote based on skill and effort rather than whether or not it's 'my type' of music. So, really, this means a lot to me...thank you.
xxAisarene