Very cool looking. But a little choppy.
And plus I couldn't tell that he wasn't happy with his life until after I read the comments. But cool looking though. I like the art.
Reviews for "The Valkyrie Ep.1"
clevelandsteamer1 responds:
Thanks for the comment, I guess I should change that description now that this thing is on the fornt page.
Not bat, but what's all the hubub about?
If I were you, I wouldn't change your original story or anything. Misrepresentation of religions on this site is commonplace. If it tells your story, tell it. Christianity is misrepresented on this site but I notice that people don't apologize nor change their story over any pressure.
clevelandsteamer1 responds:
Dont worry, I'm not going to change the story now because I've written it all out. Thanks for supporting the movie!
Nice story
I like the comic book/children's story book styling of the drawings and the notion of an afterlife though as a constructive criticism note, I think you need to work on his walking etc. Little things like that can kind of throw you off when you're concentrating on the story. Nice work mate, I'll keep an eye out for the next ep.
Decent.
This flash was pretty good. I did like the animation but I thought it could be better. Nice style to ths flash, I like the black and white style to this. The sound effetcs were pretty good but I was sad to see there wasn't any voice acting. I hope there will be some in the next episode. I also hope there is a lot more violence in the next one as well! Over all this flash is decent. The graphics and sound effects were good but could have been better. In the next episode I hope to see more violence and voice acting. Good job making this flash, keep it up! I hope to see the next episode very soon!
clevelandsteamer1 responds:
In regards to violence, this series isn't really about that aspect, so if it happens it happen but I'm not going to try and force it in an unnatural way. I'm kind of the same way with voice acting, if it ain't neccesary, don't use it, so it is also very minimized. With that said though, I do appreciate the criticisim of it, and I will be sure to up the entertainment value of the series in other ways. Thanks you for the review! :)
I liked what youre trying to say...
or rather what I think youre trying to say.
I can agree that the quality isnt the BEST Ive ever seen, but the symbolism behind your story more than makes up for it as far as I'm concerned. Anyone who watches this and calls it stupid, pointless, or random is simpley unable to look beyond the absolutes.
Keep it up, and I am looking forward to the rest of your story!
clevelandsteamer1 responds:
Thank you for seeing that this thing means something more than just the surface.