interesting...
i must say durn, u have an uncanny ability for shelling out amazing songs. this 1 seems a bit different from a lot of ur others. im glad u kept the heavy base, that really defines a song i think. gives it the character. and the synth over tones give it a new age-y feel. near 2:24 the little... idk, skip i guess, really caught me. like seeing a yellow flower in a field of grass.
* the bass (drums, 'thump' ect) undertones are great, and how u bring them in and out make this a great song fundementally
* the synth tones give it a good character, full body
* the trip with the snare at 2:24 is a good tactic to speak interest. consider working more little 'bumps' in, but dont over do it or ull sound like lady gaga lol
*the song sounded kinda airy to me. if u meant it to be a techno/trance song, good job, but if not try using sounds a bit lower in tone. it gives a listener the feeling of 'holding onto the music.' as it stands, the music is like mist, u see it, u know its there, but u cant really hold it
* again, unless the idea was a techno song, consider using more natural sounds. i hear a lot of clearly computer generated things, try recording an actual snare drum, or a musician playing a tone. a singer generating a single note can also be used independently in a song
but all in all, very good song i really enjoyed it lol. left it looping for about 15 minutes