Reviews for Battle of Supremacy

[JeffHeim]

great work!

Right off the bat, the snare drum introduction with strings was very fitting for a battle scene. I think the perc loop throughout the piece sounded cool as well, but I think you could mix it up a bit more. Maybe cut out the electronic perc groove here and there and bring back some of the snare drum material from the beginning. As for the actual piece- the string melody is active and energetic, but maybe a bit repetitive as well. Try a modulation or something to help mix things up a bit. Also, perhaps the very end could use some more reverb (just on the last note), this will help make it sound a little less synthetic. All in all, great work though. Keep it up!

[a-rest]

well done

though, as a drummer i don´t like the synthy-drums soooooo much.
keep up your work

[Setu-Firestorm]

Good Work

For its genre, it works pretty well. It seems more "drum-n-bass" with a string lead than a classical piece that happens to have some electro-styled synths and drums.
The piece sounds more suited for an action sequence than an actual definitive battle (which is what the title somewhat implies, but that's just a matter of interpretation).

What I would do, and this is just me, is layer in more instrumentation. Maybe some french horns to either add some lower strength or to complement the string lead you have going on. This piece could be meatier with some more instruments, but again, that's just a preference in composition process. This piece is very good standing alone by itself.

Keep up the good work!

[MikkMinehan]

Wonderful style

I would never have expected to hear this within the classical section, but nevertheless I'm glad I did.

My only gripe would be the repetition, bring in some new melodies! More instruments! More variety!

masterhappyboy responds:

dear MikkMinehan,

I did not expect this either! haha! i did not know why i came up to this modern fusion classical. haha! i limit my instruments since it may fall under 'what-genre-is-this-song'. haha!

thanks for hearing!

[smokeshow]

Great song

Great song I really like it and well done. As a personal preference (to make this song more interesting) I would break this song up to have an interlude at approximately 2/3's of the way in that slows everything down for about 30 seconds while building up some heavy drums and very rich strings and then breaking back into the original tune... just a though in case you wanted to work more on this piece ;)

Excellent job regardless.

masterhappyboy responds:

Dear Smokeshow,

Yeah i was also trying to get a piece on interlude but i still lack of skills. haha! thanks for giving that idea!

a great day to you! :)