I've seen worse...
...but then again, I've seen better. Much better. Work on your presentation a little bit, the whole thing was a tad rough around the edges. I liked the preloader though, keep trying! Maybe one day you'll hit gold. Oh, and next time don't say stuff like "PLEASE DONT BLAM PLEASE PLEASE please plz plz," under the author's comments. That's just silly and makes me want to blam it more. Instead say why and how you created your flash. Good luck.
The King of Caffiene, Mr_Coffee