Not bad.
^^Good Points^^
One thing I liked about this movie was the character designs. They looked pretty cute, and were simple yet still didn't look like crap. The animations were pretty good as well, and the music went pretty well with the storyline of the flash, which was also pretty good.
^^Needs Improving^^
This could be a little longer seeing how it went way too quickly, and I had to watch it a few times to completely understand what happened.
rrrrrrrrrrrrrright.
ok erm, i gave you a 5 in graphics cuz i kno flash is hard to do, 10 in style because the title was the bes bit . i gave the sound 5 prely becuz id never heard it b4, violence..hmm there was alot.lol nah no violence.interactivity, erm pressing play and closing the window, humour 1 ,. overall a 6.you could've done better , but i think all artists deserve credit because flash can be hard to learn, i kno!
Not too bad.
The animations were pretty good, i think they could be better. I get the moral of the story, but u need to make longer and make it funny.
DOESNT HAVE TO BE FUNNY NEWGROUNDS HAS A WHOLE SECTION OF SERIOUS SHORTS
Could have been better...
You could have made this longer and put a little more effort into it so it would produce a more powerful message. This flash made no sense so maybe try a little harder.
NIce!
Simple, yet stylish. I like the contrasting colors on it, and the smooth animation, tis a good idea. Odd yet amusing. Keep up the good work!
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