s'okay..
u got skills.. but i u didnt do the best u cud have done.. unlike others, i dont think u need to add color, or facial expression, cos thats ure style. story line cud have been better, was interesting, but ended suddenly..
*spoiler*
maybe for the ending u cudve had a slow motion killing instead? was a bit too fast.. enhance the dramam a bit.. but overall u showd ur skills.. now u can go back to th drawing boar and come up with sumthing a bit more awesome