Droogte.
I like your style and the story was actually getting interesting, and than it just stopped.
Try making something a little longer next time, this looked like a trailer.
BTW, not much emotion either. That's why I gave points for humour, it was kinda.. Dry. Lol.
Overall: nice style, I hope you'll make another one soon. :)
HEY LOoK ERE
hey person,
urs was ok..y did ya do it in sketch??
n have u seen tinks tutorial...(search xiao xiao) his is animated
u should c it...if u havnt..cause dat look alrite..soz..
newaiiz
u no da macromedia trial..how long is da trial..
from me
Beautiful
the animation was great overall the one thing that was wrong with it was that it ended very abruptly and it was very short. It seemed more like a trailer than an actual movie
I liked it but...
...it could have been better. Some better captions could have really made the story more interesting. The awkward sentences and overdramatics sort of took me out of the story. Also, I liked where you are going style-wise a lot, but I think you need to work on it a little bit more, make it a little cleaner maybe.
Wow this is more than I expected
No offence but when I saw the intro, I wasn't expecting much but after that bit I was blown away. Something that I really liked was the narration after each scene and the way it was made like an anime. I didn't really like the sound at first but after I saw the the first few seconds, it really suited the movie. The endiing also had a nice touch with the silhouette thing.