Ok
The animation was hot, although unfinished. The blood was horribly lame, you should have animated it all and not looped it. I understand it's for practice so it's cool. The music is pretty lame, there is no sound effects and the words got gay fast. The full face scene also, his face got too big, you should have actually drawn it so you could get it right on the screen.
good for practice, excellent outlines and movements, but please take my words into consideration.
Will do. Thanks for the review
It was alrgiht... but
It was decent, but has anyone seen Mask? It's almost exactly the same. Style and everything. I would of sworn some scende were almost taken from it. Despite it's lack of originality, pretty decent.
It was short, bitter, and without a point.
Let's see here. . . I'll start with the good. Good graphics
Ok, about now the bad! Horrible excuse for a serious flash. It looks like something a nerd in my class would write about who wasn't very good at words. WTF is up with, "This a story about, " IT WASN'T A STORY! It was just about two freaks who fought(wich was an okay fight scene) with some corny, akward lyrics in between. "Behold your knew king!" was just stupid. In fact, the whole thing was stupid.
Quite a waste of time...
But the graphics have a lot of potential. keep it up, make it longer, with color, get some better music.... stop testing and deal with real material. nice work, all in all.
Almost good
that had its good points to it, the song the story, and maybe the animation. I think you got the animation idea from mask maybe? if not, it might help to look at what he did, he was very succesfull, O found it to be too scetchy tone it down a little, you don't need color though keep on doing what your doing just look around and see what was deemed good by ng