brillian
excellent flash, only problem is your timing/pacing is totaly shit (it moves so fucking slowly)
Reviews for "Dead Part 1"
AAAHHHH!!!
Gross, nasty, morbid...GOOD JOB!
mad
Nice work dude. Shud have made longer... My Second toon was really short because u get sick of looking at the same things evertime... when this happens DONT SUBMIT! make something else for a while, screw round with sound effects or do something else cos yeah when all the reviews say make it longer ur like well doesnt anyone have anything better to say? so yeah very cool make a whole toon the same quality as the zombie hit in the face and add some music... the shadow guys an idiot there was a play button he musnt have had flash 8.
JimmySavage responds:
I sat on this for a while and did start some other projects and worked on editing sound, but I had already put in too much time on this animation. Next one'll be longer.
It's actually not half bad...
Okay, when I saw that you had said it was about a car crash, the first thing I said to myself was "Oh, way to go and spoil it..." but I obviously had no idea that there was a little more to it than that. I personally love the theme of the undead and zombies, so thumbs up for that part. I noticed there was no "Play" button... Well -I- didn't find one, anyway. I had to right click, then press Play. The style of graphics you have there is simple, yet effective enough. The scene inside the car where you see a profile of (what i'm assuming is) the main character, did look a little shabby without a face, but hey, the following frames made up for it. The fact that you used no color in it other than for red on the med kid and blood was surprising, because it's an uncommon style that does have a nice effect on it. So generally, that was all fairly well done. The sound was well timed and the car noise stood out as pretty good, too. Not the best -quality- of sound, but it was suffient enough to make this flash decent. Obviously, no humour, more than enough violence for a first episode, (loved the part where he hits the zombie with the metal tool) so overall i'll give this a six. The lack of a loading bar and Play button did -really- bring it down however.
JimmySavage responds:
There is a loading screen and a play button. Glad you liked it otherwise.
Sweet! Zombies
Gotta Luv em flesh eatin' misifits of society =P great work keep it up.