Welcome to Newgrounds
This flash is great. I personally like the music and the pace of the flash was indeed very well to how you wanted to portray to the audience. I hope to see your series come to newgrounds in future artwork. Now however here is some pointers to make it more interesting to the masses. As much as this is a piece of "art" most newgrounders want more action. Not saying that the thought is there, but coming from me I would love to see how the story forms together. Keep up the great work. Hope that some of your future works get front page. Hope to make you one of my favourite artists or at least one of your submissions.