This is your FIRST submission!?!?
Wow! This is awesome! Out of all the new submissions, this is one of the good ones. Good job!
Reviews for "With A Smile"
you are well on your way
for your first flash, this is great! ill be expecting more soon. keep up the good work
Great Work
Most first submissions I've seen are crap but this was really good. You should make more
Artsy
I guess the main emphasis of this flash was the quality of art and animation. This was followed through very well. Wonderful artwork. The music was pleasing and wasn't hard to hear or make out.
The negative aspect is the lack of story or explanation. I was really left in the dark as to what was really going on, or t had happened. Then as I'm waiting to find out, it just loops back around to the begining. That was dissapointing.
As a whole, good job on the artwork. I'd like to see more story next time however. (btw, that chic had some GIGANTIC lips lolol)
Alamus responds:
heheh yeah, she did have some big lips.
But yeah, this was just kinda to be pleasing to the eyes, not much of the elaborate story was put here. More of a begging. Thanks for your comment though!
Awesom
you have entered newgrounds with a bang. i think this is a good movie and i think it could become a series, u have set it up just like that.