I like it, DON'T KILL ME!!!
you have to calm down with your comments, let people make up their own minds and if it's not what you like, then fuck 'em! It's not like you see them every day (sorry if they do :) ). I watched this like I would a music video and that is try not to make sense of it but to just get a sense of atmosphere from it. Love the style in this, reminds me of bad dreams and the voices in my head... Nice movie by the way.
I'M GOING TO KEILL U LOL
rofl trust me i have tryed this before, if i don't say something like that in my comments, there WILL be allot of people giving my submission a low score because of that sort of stuff. By saying that, i want people to actually think past the storyline, and actually see the mood of this. Really, i wasn't trying to come off as a total psycho but lol whatever works! Thanks for the good review!
Its alrite
Well done, if you read this... The music was great with the continuess effect on the guy... The graphics was alrite, looked like it was drawn but it wasnt sorta. The animation, oh god here we go... The animation- try Frame-by-frame, cos you are good but when you just tween things it doesnt have a good effect- like when he was walking, the feet would just go back and forth and by (i think it was) every second guy he would have a half a second skip and when he moved away from the mirror. Graphics again, near the end, you should have left the sky and the grass white (since the rest is black and white, sorta). The dudes that beat him are are excellently drawn, i like how you made them. When they kicked him in the face- the blood, put atleast a darker shade of red on it (like it was a reflection or something), when hes lifting his foot off his face- you should have changed the picture of his foot, just once or twice and changed the direction he lifted it in. Well choreographed. When he gets rescued, the other guys jacket doesnt fit in with the rest of it, and again with the simple tweening (Frame-by-frame is pretty easy, its just trial and error. Also when the thing jumps up to kick the dude from behind, a simple movement when he starting descending woulda looked a lot better). When he was rescued, and outside- the hair waving, you shoulda done a coupla more frames and put a tiny actionscript to make it random. I liked the border, simple yet highly effective. Also when hes walking, and it has it veiwing his face, the closest "things" just appear, thats the time where you put it just out of the frames veiw, then tween it in... And again, when he kicks him in the face, if the guy is blurring, then whatever comes in contact with him should blur too, like the things foot... When hes sitting inside, as the "thing" is leaving, i noticed that the "thing" is soo stiff, its only his feet that are moving and they are in a continuess state, it just doesnt look natural. With those things outside, are they walking or floating? and with that, when he goes all black cosa the black thing- i the background was well transitioned but however you shouldve put a coupla MC's of scratches around and put a random location actoinscript on them, if you dont know how or where to find a tutorial I know that there is a flash somewhere on newgrounds that teaches how. The idea was great. I loved it. I dont know why they put this in goth however. I liked it alot, i watched it 7 times to pick out all those faults. But, congratulations. I loved it.. Good luck for future flashes, if you still do em, cos ppl usually learn flash and quit after a coupla years... I know I only use flashes for making friends websites and stuff like that. Well done again. this is the longest review I have written, you should feel proud... I guess... And hava nice day m8... AND THE EFFECT YOU PUT ON THE DUDE WAS GREAT! I WANNA C MORE OF IT!!!
-Bone32
lol thanks for the helpful and good and long review!
Sweet
I have never seen a flash done like that before. It was totally sweet. Also, the way the main character was blured of and on to express him was superb.
Thanks for the good review!
eh...
Great graphics and effects... but it seemed dark and angsty. I prefer to keep it happy, it was a little depressing. I think I'll check out your other flashes for now.
Overall, good work.
Thanks for the review. Yeah, people tend to like stuff that's not as serious and more on the happy side. But then again, most of those cart00ns don't really have a deeper meaning besides the humor. Anyways, i'm glad you thought it was good!
Pretty creepy transitions in this. I like the scribbled style, and the way everything fades in in a blur. The animation is simple, slow, but full of impact. Nice work!
-cd-