blurrrr
It was pretty good. You shouldn't have compressed it quite so much, that's all I'd say. The music was a bit distracting with all the low quality popping along with it. Plus, keep your frame rate low next time. It's easier to draw stuff on a low frame rate anywoo.
But yeah, good flash.
thanks for tha good reviewww
Definately Potential
Graphic/Style - Your style is pretty cool. Definatley something that's your own and not just ripped from Adult Swim or whatever. But to be honest, that little blurry effect with the main character just made my eyes ache after the first ten seconds. What would've been better, is if that happened during key scenes. Not every single scene. Or atleast spice the effect up a little, so that you can sense the rhythm of it. Because that kind of effect is supposed to give a feeling of a loss of control or chaos, right? If you can tell what each shake is going to look like pixel-for-pixel, the effect becomes a wasted effort.
Sound - What can I say, there was only background music, and you didn't even time your animation to it. Granted, you chose a good song for the background and this is supposed to be one of those 'artsy' noir things, but there could've been a few sounds. If you knew what you were doing, you'd have a few quality sounds that would amp up the emotion in the toon because of the contrast with the rest of it having no sound.
Violence - Definately work on the blood. Straight jagged lines that don't even form to the contours of the face isn't cool. And what happened to the blood after?
My main problem with this movie is that the plot sucks. I'm tempted to call it non-existent, but that wouldn't be fair. There was something going on, it just couldn't be discerned very easily, aside from somebody being alienated (because he looks different) and then escaping the fortress of the smiley faces..and then its even more gray area after that. Definately needs work.
SCREW THE PLOT NOBODY NEEDS THE PLOT THANKS FOR THE GOOD REVIEW!
Not bad...
Not bad but why the heck did you use 30 FPS?!? I mean even at 15 fps is still more then enough! Also how did you do the sky like that?? Anyways, even though I didn't understand it... that was nice! Keep it up man!
thanks for the good review!! I used 30 fps to challenge myself to be able to make a longish movie with that many fps.
nice
lol@goth... bah, does that make me a goth for liking it?
anyway, good. I watched it 'til the end so that must mean somthing. Good to see some original style... If the last reviewer was sleeping on top of a moving bus, I'd probably roll him off the side.
YES I CAN'T BELIEVE SOMEBODY ACTUALLY THOUGHT THIS WAS IN ANYWAY LIKE SALAD FINGERS!! SOME PEOPLE ARE REALLY SILLY!!
well anyway i responded telling him to email me and say the reasons that it was like salad fingers, and lol sorry i'm venting my anger on you. Thanks for the good review!
Cool
Nice work, I liked it