Pretty good...
Good, with the exception of two things: 1. Your spelling errors and 2. Since when did robots start to bleed?
Nonetheless, good job!
Keep em coming :D
Reviews for "OLD ::TBB1"
Unknown-15 responds:
omg i just realizzzzed that its like scary-movie...it uses other movies ideas :p
well this is like terminator -_-:
night-shade and dark-bird have metall skeleton and flesh and Blood, by the way...whats the fun with sticks if they cant bleed ? :P
This is a little stronger than your teaser
Your use of cut scenes are good. You animated the inter-cutting of your titles with action well enough.
Your weakness is in your stick fighting animating and storylines. I say this because your fighting between the two main characters seems blocky and unnatural. Perhaps a little more practice on this will help your characters look more real, when they fight. Secondly, I fail to see where your plotlines are going. Every good action movie has a basic plot that the viewers can follow. Your weakness here is that you don't explain why Night Shade is constantly running away from guys he can obviously defeat. If there is a problem with him that forces him to keep running, then it'd be good to put that in. Otherwise don't waste your time by dragging out this fight when we all know who'll win in the end.
Other than this, your ideas for action movie sequences are fine. Keep them flowing and don't give up.
Hmm...
You certainly have potential, but before you animate any more please make sure the english is correct, im not one to be getting on to people about it but to be honest it has caused blams. Keep up the good animating and improve on the graphics. Try and Synchronise the sound if possible (music), good luck.
Great animation... Bad English...
You have a talent here my friend. What I couldn't really understand is how somethings were so detailed, but others you left very plain.
There was some nice trucking in there which impressed me a fair bit, and overall there really were some great effects.
You should post some tutorials on some of them blurs, or the trucking, or some of the other effects.
Well done anyway, but please proof read and check your spelling and grammar. That really let this movie down. I still rated fairly though, despite the grammar. [/Grammar Nazism]
It shows potential.
As MANY have said, you really need to learn to spellcheck your scripts. The story was skind of original, thing is went too much the the tune of "I, Robot" with the whole "robots learning to be independent" thing, as others have said. The blood was very well done however, and it shows in my violence mark. As someone has also said, work on the actual character animation, 'cause people don't run by shuffling their feet together with their heads hunched over and buried in their shoulders. Besides that, you've got a pretty decent flash here. Just take some of the stuff that other users and I have said. I give it a 3/5.
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