Good but sloppy
Hello this is very nice movie although it is sloppy, i still realy like it and i cant wait to see how good the next one will be, you could improve the animation abit in this movie but thats all that realy needs improved and maybe the sounds aswell.
Needs work
Animation wasn't that great, and you need to run your text through spell check so that you don't look like a moron. But, the story was decent.
Somebody, shoot it in the backhead!!!
The only redeeming thing about this was your awful spelling, I even rewatched it in order to enjoy such delights as "use hes Brain".
Frankly I think if your going to go to the trouble of doing an animation as long as this one you could at least use a spell check, and maybe a dictionary.
Actually your animation wasn't that bad, it just a shame the story isn't more original, and why the hell is every character name hyphenated.
Keep working at, I look forward to part two.
P.s.
I'm going to be chuckling over the word backhead for days.
Pure shit.
Jonas! I fucking hate you Jonas, loser.