Reviews for OLD ::TBB1

[aMikaBoo]

Hmmm

Everything was decent/good... except the animations...

When animating you really need to exaggerate movements, like when they run really stretch out their legs and arms, have them slant forwards a bit and make the running animation faster overall...

Some animation you did was excellent, like at the start he fell down and landed then sprinted off it looked really good how he took off.

And a lot of the effects were done very nicely as well...

Proof read as well please (although it really isn't a big deal... it's an easy improvement)

[Undergoingurge]

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re...re...reMIX

[CloudTrifle]

Great animation... Bad English...

You have a talent here my friend. What I couldn't really understand is how somethings were so detailed, but others you left very plain.

There was some nice trucking in there which impressed me a fair bit, and overall there really were some great effects.

You should post some tutorials on some of them blurs, or the trucking, or some of the other effects.

Well done anyway, but please proof read and check your spelling and grammar. That really let this movie down. I still rated fairly though, despite the grammar. [/Grammar Nazism]

[Kharbon]

Hmm...

You certainly have potential, but before you animate any more please make sure the english is correct, im not one to be getting on to people about it but to be honest it has caused blams. Keep up the good animating and improve on the graphics. Try and Synchronise the sound if possible (music), good luck.

[Sydness]

hmmmmm

I liked how smooth everything, but please get somebody with a decent reading level to proofread before subjecting people to that kind of brutal assult on the english language.