Not bad for a short deadline.
I like the basic concept. Even though I believe the robots should not have accents or even voices at all, the points had to be made and that was probably the only way to do it without subtitles. Subtitles with strange robotic languages would have been funky, IMO...
Otherwise, it was done fast and it was done fairly well, the music was good and kept the action fierce despite some simple motions (tweens) by the cyborgs. I liked it, but I think the next episode will be a lot better since you don't have a deadline this time...
So says Dr. Manhattan...