Great
finally someones first submission actually hints at some talent, that was awesome, i personally havent seen sin city. But i think im going to
Great
finally someones first submission actually hints at some talent, that was awesome, i personally havent seen sin city. But i think im going to
BRAVO!
Excellent work for a beginner!
Graphics - Great! You draw (trace) or draw very niceley! either way! It doesnt matter, because it looked fucking sweet
Style - Cant get any better than taking the scenes right from the book! Nice! They looked fantastic! It takes along time to do it! i've tried.
Sound - I've never heard that song before, I like it. Though, music is the most picky part for myself. I'm not typing that the music didnt fit! It did, but if I were you (which i'm obviously not) I would have gone with Graeme Revelle's score or John Powell's from the movie. Or even something more instrumental. But your choice worked.
Violence - Nothing too much, but it was still at presence. Not bad at all.
Interactivity/humor - duh
Overall - 10. You are a great artist and for this matter and pretty decent animator! Keep it up. I honestly cannot wait for your next work!
Weak
When you trace another artists work and use direct quotes, you shouldn't try to play it off as your own. Be realistic about it. I don't understand how so many fans of the comic have no idea that you put no thought whatsoever into this animation. I'm glad you decided to make a tribute to Sin City, but this was a poor attempt. Everything with the exception of one drawing (the kiss) was traced. Throwing in blinking animations and music that doesn't fit shouldn't have given his a high score.
Sin City fans wont be disappointed
Very nice, takin the caracter's drawing right from the comic, very nice. The music was weird, but so is the music from the movie. Short but sweet. Great job
u missed one thing
this flash was alrite very good for your first flash congrads but there was somehting wrong with it. You said htere was gonna be no spoilers for people who havent seen Frank miller`s, Rober Rodquries, Qunetin trantino`s master peace adaption to frank miller sin city. i found that Marvs had alot of spoilers its gave way the whole main plot to his story (a hard good by) but other than that it was good